Redo of the Ketuvah / by debbie rich

The relationship promise — or Ketuvah, as I'm calling it — that a friend commissioned last year came back a few months ago. It is on its merry way again. The pen that I inked the letters with basically got sucked in by the moisture, like invisible ink in reverse. So I've repainted in richer colors and did the letters in paint with a thin brush. I like it better! 

Here is the in-between stage. And here's how the original looked.